I feel confident that I have all the information I need to create a clear story of the event I am focusing on. It was easy putting similar information together, but difficult putting the sorted information all together to create a larger picture. Outlining my information although time consuming helped me overcome this difficulty. I was surprised to learn that transferring the research from my outline to my paper proved annoying. I'm concerned about writing my conclusion, for some reason it seems to be the biggest cause of my worries. I think I am going to have trouble making another point about my topic instead of simply wrapping it up as I normally would.
I need to change the focus on my paper from the denial of the current Turkish government to how the Armenian Genocide defines genocide, through person first-hand accounts. This was not easy considering most of my research was pertaining to my original thesis I found a couple new sources and have gotten good usage out of those. I would appreciate feedback on my organization and writing style because I feel that for this paper those are the two things that are most important.
